Not bad. A few typos and tense issues, but I am no one to judge. I’m the exact same way. :)

I’m pretty sure there’s a delete option for stories that have no comments if you want to get rid of the other 6.

The last few sentences have a cool repetition to them.

i thought so,
but they were entered into a challenge, so it doesn’t work!
sigh

Niiiiice! Really makes me wonder what the key is for.

The last three lines make this story.