I think he touched a nerve..

i love the detail of how she sits facing the sun, ‘because it’s warm’, and who doesn’t appreciate a warm ray of sun?

Almost childishly simple, but also able to tug at emotional strings the way children so easily do. I want to know what happened.

Interesting personification.

Very nice though the back to back conversation could be adjusted a little bit to deliver more of an impact. I like this though.