Yes, yes quite!

Could definately be followed up. Never read a mermaid drama before lol. Good stuff.

Okay, I wish not to sound dumb.. what story is this supposed to be based off of?

Jane Eyre – by Charlotte Bronte

Don’t worry you don’t sound dumb!

I enjoyed reading Mermaid Jane very much.

Too much telling. And you’re forcing too much of the story out at once.

What an interesting combination! The injustice makes my blood boil.