I would love someone to keep this going… I don’t really know what I want to do with it.

wow, great beginning.. hm, is she nervous simply because he has hurt her in the past, or is there something else?

I agree with Elsha, this is a really good beginning, it hooked me in :)

I wasn’t so much going in the direction that she was nervous because he hurt her, but moreso because she doesn’t want her son to have a relationship with this man. She’s nervous about a custody battle, and having to share her child, and she’s worried about whether or not he’s actually going to stay clean.

Twist it. Tell him the boy is his to see what he does. THEN paternity test if he gets nasty and it will turn out ….not his child. lol. If he is nice no paternity test and because he is now sooo rich you will share the child willingly. (Well at least he will have a rich daddy.)

What makes you think he has money? Being sober doesn’t mean he’s working or getting any money at all. And she knows that it’s his kid.

I love how I am the only one who caught this! (At least in the comments) She said she’s been sober for about 7 years. The kid is about to turn 7. Coincidence? Or Drunken Conception? 5 Lapices :)

thank you for catching that!
The idea was that she got sober when she found out that she was pregnant…