You’re an incredibly good writer, Mr. Gabriel.

This is definitive proof that you are not restrained to the romance genre, Gabe…

Strong dialogue, a really interesting power play between the characters – quite a dark ending as well, which I found satisfying for varying the tone – MH :)

Nicely done. I like the banter back and forth to give us their relationship and then the cruel twist at the end. Seems like a dangerous game for her, but who said immortality was easy?
I think you missed a ‘to’ in that last sentence.

well, hearing their screams is certainly a turn off, but the torture is quite convincing. I agree with MH, you need to write more villains. :)

Villainous. I love this character.