I was homeschooled for 4 years. Was fun, but I like school better. :)

I really like how her life represents what she lacks now. Also the tiny details like ‘cause’ ‘sucks’ ‘heck’ really bring us back to her age group.

Well done

Me likey. I like how the first thing she writes about is where she’ll be. She’s always on the move so i can get that that would be important to her.

This is good. The character seems soo certain of her future – not even a quiver of her desires. That, being my praise, is also my fault – almost too certain to be completely human. I think she’s living in a dream…
Abby
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Nice work with this. I especially like the last line; it seems to hint that she really values having stability, maybe because she doesn’t now.

The last line really gets to me. It’s so wistful and wanting, especially considering the fact that she’s never really had a place to call home.

A very nice statement of values and intentions. The fact that I am not so sure they are wise intentions is no reflection on the quality of this piece.