Comments on Little Pitchers, Big Ears by Paige Elizabeth

BegoniaRob

Fun, fun, fun. I can almost picture the mushroom cloud in the background.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Robert Quick

The ending was a pleasant surprise (for me, not for your characters). I wasn’t sure how the last twenty was going to fit in and then BAM there it was. Excellent story.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

aww, such a sweet way to present this topic!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Paige Elizabeth

When I read this challange, my first thought was “candy!” Then I had to figure our how to make that into a story.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
spongmunky

I love it, innocent and childlike but also menacing. Very well done.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
peritales

Ha! I might by candy too.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
peritales

Ha! I might buy candy too.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
rawrchiteuthis

Oh man, this took a quick turn for the terrifying! Really good!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
cthulhuburger

The last line makes this story deserve its 5 pencils.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Raymond Finn

Excellent. Almost like an episode the Twilight Zone. Very entertaining.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
N. Robertson

Aha, good. I grinned. Maybe there could be some transition between the evening and morning, IMHO.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5