Ohh, this deserves a sequel. I will have to think about it.

My only complaint is the last line, shouldn’t it be “My story is so close.”

The tension is palpable. Will she get her book or will she be caught? What will happen if she is caught. There also seems to be a subtle warning in this. I agree with smdasilva. This deserves a sequel. Nice job on this. I enjoyed it.

Very intriguing… I can see this giant sandstone (or slate-grey) pillar of a building towering over everything else, where all these books are kept.

Sequelage is needed, indeed.

I love the story of your life is a book idea. Has a nice mythical feel, and sets up alot of sequel possibilities.
My only critique would be on grammer…I think “great passing” should be capitalized seeing how it is a proper name of the ‘event’. “remeber” is misspelled. The H in Graceheart shouldn’t be capitalized. And as smdsilva mentioned: add the word “is”