Comments on Preface to Control by Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

It’s an incomplete thought, put here that I might come back to it when I have the time and ability to turn it into something better.

Try not to take offense.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
LaraLustre

I enjoyed this. When I started reading I thought you were entering in this challenge http://ficly.com/challenges/700 .. with the lyric ‘You picked a fine time to leave me, Lucille ..’ .. but of course now I am even more curious.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Jim Stitzel

Funny how Ficly turns into a scratch pad for larger story ideas, eh? I’m intrigued!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

It’s an idea I’ve been thinking about for a while… What if we’re not seeing the whole picture?
- Posted over 9 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

oh, you think you’re funny huh? lol, This is quite a twist, but I like it!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
bluefish

“Lucille, attempting to help him, inadvertently led his first two followers away from his strict path.”

I think there’s a whole novel right there. :D
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Well, at least the good part of a chapter…
- Posted over 9 years ago.