Hunh. I don’t know that I quite understand the sentiment of it, but that is a powerful statement.

Wow. He was skydiving, was he?

ouch, that’s one hard fall.. hope he was only jumping from the roof… lol

Was the desperation his life, to take it this way? I feel resignation. But contest aside: this was a superb blurb!

Really cool. It keeps me guessing about the circumstances of the fall and whose perspective is narrating. It sparks a whole story of imagination. Nice job!