hehehe… this series is awesome.. fun stuff.

The phrase “defensive strategy” doesn’t seem very natural, and doesn’t particularly flow well.

That said, it’s a solid story, and has a riveting cliffhanger… I don’t know how I’m going to address it!

i think mess wants a crack first..

oh this her marli is unmistakable

Author,Author, take a bow. you seem to have the ‘Aussie lilt’ down pat. I won’t have to send that Aussie dictionary after all.lol

Hey Elsha I just re read this as something did not seem right then heres merotflol as we do not have bears in Australia. he he .Only Koala bears and it was at thi point I had to tell the next door neighbour what was so funny.ha ha

lol marli! You have been transported to North America! actually, who cares, it’s fiction!

Wow, and you got two sequels even. Good continuation and debate on tactics. I would have like to see some mention of how many in the party, just to make it easier to picture.