One of those dinophile crazies! This is not a far jump from the prequel, good job!

I would take great pleasure in directing anybody who branded your writing as cliche and left it for dead to THIS STORY, which made me laugh muchly!

Well done here, very funny, the male relationship thing was right on the money – bravo!

hahahah

I read this one before last’s original and it was still good

I need to start opaying more attention to the sequel/prequel system

Oh sure, I write a slut and you make her a fetishist. At least she isn’t a furry…

hahahaha gave me a good laugh

and you, lastsyllable, kudos to you for having the gall to make a name like Caliope Cervantes!

I can’t really take the credit… it was supplied by a random name generator. But it was basically everything I could ever want in a name for someone like her.

Hehe, this one gave me the giggles “raptor style” teeheehee

Nicely done, Ed. Slick dialogue that really bounces along. I like it.