Comments on Before Me Was a White Horse by Alex Pope

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A white Ford _Mustang_…brilliant! Sort of brings Constantine to mind, but this is wildly different and just as good.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Nouvelle Bardot

a delightful point of view. i wonder what the fate shall be of those children…
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Nouvelle Bardot

a delightful point of view. i wonder what the fate shall be of those children…
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

Ahaha, a Ford Mustang! That is awesome! An elementary school, huh? This has great promise!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

Also, welcome to Ficly!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

no, welcome back!
ford mustang, cleverly witty. and my last thoughts.. noo not the kids! but then again, kids can be most vile.. :P
- Posted about 10 years ago.
kaellinn18

I thought I recognized the name, but when I tried to check the Ficlets archive, I couldn’t find him.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mr.Gabriel

Wow. This was really good.

I remember the horsemen from Charmed.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
stargazer1960

Well a white Ford Mustang is certainly going to draw a lot of attention, especially at an elementary school.

Well done.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Alex Pope

Thank you all! Nice to see I’m on the right track here – I’ll see if I can avoid getting derailed.

Oh, and I am indeed new to this format and community. Thank you for the welcome – this looks like a nice place to spend some time.
- Posted about 10 years ago.