Comments on Day 5: Initiation By Sylvia Plath by Catherine

The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}

I think I can see who her partner might be. :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Catherine

maybe not….
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mostly Harmless

New character alert? Robin/Kat dialogue is very strong, here as always. I like the tone of your writing. And the most realistically readable ‘book’ so far… MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

and?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Nymphaea Rose

robin or not? Hmm….

Everyone always groans when those words of selected partners is said lol.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mr.Gabriel

You should capatalize six when Kat says this.

I vote on not Robin, get someone in here to get him jealous. Cause a little drama…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.