I have to say, if I were to be knocked out by a sexy female thief, that would be the way to go.

Awesome, hilarious moment deftly told. Really liked the bits of back story as well. Only critique would be the use of present tense for her not squeaking. It’s semi-justifiable, I think, but personal preference would be for it to stay past tense.

Really brilliant descriptions here which set the scene fantastically…

I love how this moves from thrilling espionage to perfectly-pitched hilariosity in the space of a couple of paragraphs – still keeping a decent plot sandwiched in between the two!

MH :)

Agreed, THX – I hadn’t even noticed that until you mentioned it. Fixed.

Thanks for the props, gentlemen! This was a fun one to write. I had it in mind when I wrote the original, but hadn’t even considered writing it until someone mentioned it in the comments. :)

Very nicely done, I enjoyed it

Wow, I actually had a story like this in mind. Started it in English class, but couldn’t finish it. I liked this one, nicely told.

boobs FTW! and syringes.. great combo. :)