This is powerful, to leave home and know it may be far away when the competiton is over and also to see how brave and yet sensitive she is.

You build a really vivid picture of Miss Someday.

Another fine contestant on this field of battle… 3 cheers

“Then I will speak in their language, or they will learn mine.” Love that line. It really speaks of confidence in her power. Would be interested in knowing her origins. Overall great job. A very vivid entrance to a compelling character.

Somehow foreign and familiar at the same time. Great execution.

The conversational back and forth makes this one special. Good Luck, Miss Someday.

I too love the conversation. Sweet and simple. Camp Cypress is always there darling.
Simple character, simple conversation, but we all can see the detail behind all that simplicity.

Lovely image and character. Really amazing how many of the contestants created something really lovely as an entry, rather than just a placeholder, “Hey, I’m participating” sort of post."

This is a great example of this, a bit of story that could stand on its own outside the challenge. Nicely done. And definitely related to the nomadic way of life. Are you without a home town as well?

Confident and sure, Miss Someday has the qualities of a great and viable challenger.

Although, her story is heavy in dialog, not a word in it is “filler”. Instead these words speak a vivid story of character and conviction.

As the good doctor said it’s a story ‘that could stand on its own outside the challenge’. I agree and hope we hear more of it later.