I originally published this story on Ficlets under the title “My Stargirl.” I recently revisited it for an application, redid bits of it, and thought I would post it again…

This is very pretty. And sad. You are very good at writing descriptions that don’t seem forced. Everything just flows beautifully.

i remember this . :)

Everything I have read of yours has captured a real emotional response from me – and this is no different. Very personal, incredibly well-written.

I HAVE to follow you now, or I might miss something! MH :)

very emotional. that poor girl… both of them. =/

Wow, this is absolutely incredible. I’m looking forward to reading your other works. =)

wow that was incredibly powerful and it reminded me alot of my life

This is amazing. I’ve lost a friend and you’ve really captured the emotions that went through my mind at the time.

It truly is a great sadness when one so like an angel takes such a course of action.

This is so emotional. And it does a good job at showing all the emotions: the love and the hate. Great story!

I love Stargirl.

Beautiful. This should win a challenge, so I hope you enter it when an appropriate one appears. How about 447.

That’s really, really sad. I loved it! Well done for the emotions – it really passes from the words into the reader.
Let’s try and get this one featured guys…
5/5 =D
Abby x

Everyone has pretty much said all there is to say…so I’ll just say it again. Beautiful! Amazing! 5 pencils :)