Wow…this is exactly like my standard teenage girl sleepover =’) Great idea, imaginative as always.

Typo on the second last line…I presume you meant “wicked as theY come” and I would add a comma after that particular phrase. You mis-spelt altar in the same paragraph.

I love the humour and the descriptions, although brief, paint a great picture.
Nice write,
Abby x

I can sort of glimpse the gathering of old crones and the teenage adventure on two different levels at once, which worked really rather well.

This was a lot of fun. I hope you write a sequel.

I love the things that they substituted—the raspberry candle is probably my favorite. I am dying to know if the spell actually works!!

This is pure Awesomeness at it’s finest! Though I might changed the word “heretic” to “virgin” … heretic implies someone that wouldn’t be there, and the image of Sophie collecting/possessing a ziplock of someone else’s you know what seemed creepy, even for me. :) What do I know, it was awesome nonetheless.

Hilarious and serious at the same time. Kudos to you!

really creative!