HAHAH!

Excellent. Romeo, oh, Romeo, the stalker creeper Romeo.

hahahaha I love it! That’s exactly what I was thinking when I read the play! Amazing job!

This is amazing! I love it! Excellent mesh of past and modern, with an interesting twist of friendship b/w Juliet and Rosaline. Really wonderful! Excellent job.

O Romeo, O Romeo, where4 Rt thou Romeo?

A very well done, the kind of thing that I couldn’t actually conceive, but was hoping for when I posted the challenge – brava!

I particularly like that the way you’ve written it means you don’t have to know the play to get some fun out of it – but if you do it’s even better…

Good work and thanks for entering – MH :)

HA! I always loved the bit about him stalkin that chick at the start, it just showed how much of a desperate fool he was. He’s really irritating at points like that. And in the balcony scene, god, how sexist was that scene? He just kept talking about how she was like a commodity, something to be owned, he even called her _merchandise_inferring he could purchase her or trade her on. People think it’s really romantic, but there are a lot of subtle comments. Getting back on track, ten bottles of awesome sauce

As har as it is to read chat-speak, though I applaud you for not going overboard with it, this was a really funny modernization and reworking of the romeo-juliet theme.

Brilliant!

HA! This is great!!

Thanks for the love!

one more! i love it!