I enjoyed this greatly. The last line is perfect.

Outstanding.

I like the idea, but the Nadsat feels forced. You seem to ease into it as you go, though, so that the ending flows quite a bit better than the beginning.

Hehe yeah I was using a nadsat glossary and didn’t really have much of an idea for this other than “Oooo Zombie Droogs!” It’s been a good while since I’ve read Clockwork. Once I found a direction though, it does seem to flow a bit better.

I will say that a benefit of easing into the nadsat is that it gives the reader time to realize “Oh, okay, you’re putting zombies in A Clockwork Orange.”

That was my issue. I had to look back at the title. XD

Other than that (which was really me more than you) it was great!

Very enjoyable. I did not feel that it was forced , I thought you eased us into it. A very enjoyable piece :)

Realistically ported over. I like how you were able to adapt everything into the vernacular.

I have never read a clockwork orange, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story

Very nice job.
I liked this story quite a bit.

i never read clockwork orange either. something to add to my list i guess. Liked the style and the voice of this piece though.

i’m extremely confused… i’ve never read A Clockwork Orange, nor do i know what it’s about. but i’m guessing not zombies?

Oh melia my wife was a HUGE FAN of clockwork and would just tALK IN THAT MADE UP LANGUAGE EVERYTIME SHE WAS EVEN MORE THAN A LITTLE DRUNK. sO THIS GAVE ME GREAT PLEASURE READING IT, Jesi and Burgess would have been more than proud awesome job.

Spot on rendition. I could so easily hear Malcolm McDowell in my head. Poor invisibility hasn’t seen the show. Not know said author’s age, I hesitate to recommend watching it. Great mash up, I must say.

I think you captured the little juvenile deliquent’s pervy mindset quite well. You should be a little concerned.
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This is absolutely genius. I love the movie and I like it with zombies too!

Never read/seen The Clockwork Orange, but I have to say that after reading the Wiki article, and rereading this story, t’was great!